P3 Practice Pitch

 Practice Pitch:

I feel my pitch went quite well considering it was the first one. A lot of the questions asked relates to a detail I’d forgotten to mention so to improve for next time I will go back and make sure I cover all of my ideas. I feel I could improve the visual look of my presentation to suit the themes of the show and make it more interesting to look at. I also could definitely improve my confidence for the final pitch so I can sell my product in a more convincing way. 

Feedback:

How old did you plan for the teenager (main character) to be?
Around 17

What role do the police play? Do we get to know them?

Most are side characters, against the main character as they don't think he can help them, one of them takes him in as a sort of son figure and the audience will learn more about that police officer. 

What is the precise mental health struggle and how does this play a role in the show?

I haven't fully figured this out yet but it will play a role in his backstory and explain more of the way his life is in some way.

Why has he chosen to help the police? What is his motivation?

He's only a criminal as a last resort so when the police offer to help him it keeps him out of prison and it allows him to use his skills for a better use, initially he partially wants to do it to help him carry out his perfect crime but as the show goes on he becomes more of a good person and is in it to help. 

Potential questions for the final pitch:

How many locations will there be?
Are there any other significant characters?
What genre of music will it involve?
What are some of the character's names?