After being given feedback on my third script I made the necessary improvements to finalise my script. I added more descriptive language in order to set out the vision better for the production crew. In addition, I made some technical adjustments such as adding in camera instructions and transitions. Lastly, I was given feedback to further develop interactions between characters to give them more meaning.
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Final pitch: Feedback: 1. Is the end of the first series too much of a cliffhanger? When the main characters mum leaves it’s final so that p...
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Feedback: 1. How old did you plan for the teenager (main character) to be? Around 17, I will add more detail on my character to make it mor...
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